Your case study says the client was delighted and efficiency improved. The reader has seen four hundred of those, believes none of them, and closes the tab before the logo finishes loading.
The situation before, stated with a number. What was tried and did not work. What you actually did, specifically enough to be repeatable. The result, with the same number as at the start. And what you would do differently, which is the part that makes the rest believable.
Opening with time saved and closing with revenue growth reads as a switch, because it is one. Whatever number you use to describe the problem is the number that has to appear at the end, changed.
Send a link or a draft. We reply with what to cut, what is missing and the one number it needs. One email, no call.
A published page, a draft, or the topic you are stuck on. An editor reads it and writes back with what to cut, what is missing and what number it needs. No call, no pitch.